That was awesome BUT....
Fix your preloader, remove those odd white bars, and add some more music and sound, resubmit it and it will be freaking awesome.
That was awesome BUT....
Fix your preloader, remove those odd white bars, and add some more music and sound, resubmit it and it will be freaking awesome.
Here is the best advice anyone could give you:
When you're making a flash cartoon, HAVE A POINT!!!! IT MAKES IT SOOOO MUCH MORE INTERESTING FOR THE VEIWER!!
Pretty good, I liked it.
For the record, it was the COLUMBINE high school massacre (Not Columbia or Columbina) that many people mentioned in earlier reviews.
Anyway, Columbine was a horrid thing, but I understand that you didn't know, and I've been to Columbine High School and the 'school setting' in your cartoon looks nothing like Columbine. So don't worry about what people say.
Keep making flash, you can only get better! ^_^
mmm... pie
I likes this, it r funny
What the hell???
What is the motive, WHY does this person want to kill his self??? It was complietly unrealistic...
No plot, no animation, no entertainment.... end of story.
Try next time, you'll get better.
Well...what's the point? Wait for the next one?
If you are going to make that short of a cartoon, then why make the viewer suffer through it when it doesn't have a point? I don't think it is necessary to make this a series, one part would be fine. Thus I suggest you make things with a better plot that begins sooner. How you put the Mario sprites together was great.
Keep trying; you’ll get it sooner or later.
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