That was awesome BUT....
Fix your preloader, remove those odd white bars, and add some more music and sound, resubmit it and it will be freaking awesome.
I think your message is really good, just work on your animation and it will be great.
That was awesome! Smooth animation, great music, nice style, and one hell of a twisted ending. =D (me likey!)
Keep up the good work, NG needs more people like you.
Here is the best advice anyone could give you:
When you're making a flash cartoon, HAVE A POINT!!!! IT MAKES IT SOOOO MUCH MORE INTERESTING FOR THE VEIWER!!
Pretty good, I liked it.
For the record, it was the COLUMBINE high school massacre (Not Columbia or Columbina) that many people mentioned in earlier reviews.
Anyway, Columbine was a horrid thing, but I understand that you didn't know, and I've been to Columbine High School and the 'school setting' in your cartoon looks nothing like Columbine. So don't worry about what people say.
Keep making flash, you can only get better! ^_^
I likes this, it r funny
What the hell???
What is the motive, WHY does this person want to kill his self??? It was complietly unrealistic...
No plot, no animation, no entertainment.... end of story.
Try next time, you'll get better.
You spelled Jon's name wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's Jonathan NOT Jonathon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Otherwise pretty cool, but what the hell is up with the pokemon rip-off? That sucked, korn is not anime, definatly not pokecrap!!!
Well...what's the point? Wait for the next one?
If you are going to make that short of a cartoon, then why make the viewer suffer through it when it doesn't have a point? I don't think it is necessary to make this a series, one part would be fine. Thus I suggest you make things with a better plot that begins sooner. How you put the Mario sprites together was great.
Keep trying; you’ll get it sooner or later.
I liked the KoRn song. By the way the song is called a Christmas Song, not Jingle Balls. It would be so much better if you had good animation.
Also get things in proportion, like legs, arms, dicks, heads, ect. The colors and clothes, do you think that people really wear things like that? I don't. Just improve a few things and it will be great. Anyway, you had things in sync with the music, that was really good. It was funny.
You have potential, keep trying!
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